This chapter went through a major modification today. I realized it was getting too big and taking too long to write & so decided to split it into 3 chapters. Which now means that I have chapter 3 done as well & just need to add some details :)
Also, while adding a bit detail to chapter 2, I ended up adding a huge part that I completely skipped over in the un-split version so that's pretty nice :)
And in case you forgot, this is the first time I'm putting one of my stories online. So please give me feedback, point out flaws in my writing so I can fix them & tell me how I can improve the story in pacing, technique, dialogue, characterization & whatnot. Also give me ideas on the name.
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Also, while adding a bit detail to chapter 2, I ended up adding a huge part that I completely skipped over in the un-split version so that's pretty nice :)
And in case you forgot, this is the first time I'm putting one of my stories online. So please give me feedback, point out flaws in my writing so I can fix them & tell me how I can improve the story in pacing, technique, dialogue, characterization & whatnot. Also give me ideas on the name.
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Chapter
2 – First fight
“They
got a Pegasus missile”, Rafiq yelled into the intercom while reattaching the
wires that came loose from a previous laser volley.
Sofia
leaned over and looked at the image on the vidscreen of the small red-coloured
claw-shaped mantis scouting ship The Space-Kite was chasing. “Are you sure?
Looks kinda like an Artemis launcher to me.”
Before
Rafiq could respond said missile launcher on the mantis scout fired off 2
missile warheads, one after another, straight towards them.
Lagardy
yelled “Pomeroy, port side thrusters” and veered to the right.
One
of the missiles missed its mark but the next hit home on the engines.
Immediately the mantis scout fired off another volley of dual lasers and heavy laser.
With the engine weakened, all 3 hit their mark. The dual laser disrupted The Space-Kite’s
level 2 ionic shielding momentarily and the heavy laser got through and hit
squarely on the engines.
From
her squatting posture, Sofia lost her balance in the ensuing shockwave and
tumbled over. The vibration also caused Rafiq’s laser pistol to fly out of his
holster and to a corner of the room.
“Poms?
Are you okay?” Sofia shouted in her intercom while quickly standing up.
“Affirmative.
Engine status, critical and on fire. Assistance appreciated”, came the reply
from Pomeroy in its normal voice which lacked any hint of alarm. Engis, being
techno-organic lifeforms, feel emotions very differently from bio-organic
lifeforms.
“You
got it. Fick, weapon’s up to you. I gotta go help Pomeroy.” Sofia said running
towards the door.
“Got
it”, replied Rafiq as he finished tightening the wires of the charging conduit
to the burst laser and it started to power up again.
Captain
Lagardy’s voice came over the intercoms, “Rafiq, fire the Artemis. We’re
sitting ducks with our engines offline.”
“I
haven’t got the vector calculations yet captain. There’s a high chance of
missing”, Rafiq responded.
“Did
you listen to what I said? We can’t dodge. If they fire that Pegasus again…”
“Sir,
we already accidentally wasted 2 k-ammo with the autofire getting jammed. If I
miss this one…”
“Their
shields are back online; the laser won’t cut it. Fire the missile alrea…oh
shit!”
The
Pegasus missile fired its dual warheads again. Rafiq surmised that the mantis
ship had an automated weapons reloader to be able to fire again this fast. He
swore under his breath.
The
2 warheads were headed straight towards the weapons of The Space-Kite. Rafiq
muttered, “Of course. Target the weapons once the ship’s disabled.” But that
also meant that the missiles were headed TOWARDS the weapons.
“Rafiq,
get out of the weapons bay”, came Bear’s frantic voice over the coms.
Rafiq
didn’t reply. He kept staring intently at the screen. This was going to be a
manual shot.
“Rafi…”
Pew
pew pew, fired the Burst Laser Mk 2 the moment the first warhead pierced through
the forward portion of the ship’s shield. The first 2 shots hit the 2 incoming
missiles dead on, exploding them both. The missile debris pelted the hull of
The Space-Kite, sending shockwaves throughout the entire ship. Lagardy was
stunned. So was probably the mantis captain because the 3rd laser
shot went and landed on their shields.
“Holy
Ardun”, exclaimed Zekko as he saw in the vidscreen what just happened.
Rafiq
immediately fired the Artemis. It flew straight and slammed on the hull of the
enemy’s shield generator room, dropping the shield’s level back down to 1 once
again.
Over
in the engines room Sofia and Pomeroy had managed to put out the fire just in
time to see the 2 missiles exploding out the windows. Sofia gasped. Pomeroy just
said in its usual calm voice, “Probability of interception of both warheads,
0.12%. Event category, extremely rare”, before starting to repair the engines.
“…Holy
crap Rafiq! Did you freaking plan that?”, Lagardy finally asked.
“One
second captain”, said Rafiq as he shot the hull laser, the first of which hit
the enemy ship’s shield, disrupting it and letting the other one go through, hitting
the weapons bay. The Pegasus missile launcher was immediately depowered.
“You
were saying captain?”
“Damn
son, that was insane!” replied the captain, still astonished. “For all my 11
odd years of field duty, I’ve never even heard anyone take down 2 Pegasus
missiles with a laser volley. 1 missile? Yes. Two? Never.”
Rafiq
smiled at the coms and as the burst laser charged back to full, fired it again.
The first laser packet hit the single remaining shield of the mantis scout and
temporarily disrupted it. The scout ship frantically fired its thrusters and managed
to dodge the second packet, but the last one slammed squarely on their cockpit,
sending shockwaves through the scout’s weakened hull and overheating the
piloting system until it was completely disabled.
The
mantis ship fired their laser volley once again. But with the engine somewhat
repaired Lagardy fired the rear thrusters and propelled the ship slightly forwards,
missing one of the dual laser packets. The other laser and the heavy laser both
hit and disrupted the level 2 shield temporarily. But with no other weapon to
strike through this opening in The Space-Kite’s ionic shielding, the scout’s attack
was rendered ineffectual. Zekko brought the shields back online very quickly.
The
mantis scout redirected the reactor power from the heavy laser to the Pegasus and
the missile started charging up again. But the two laser weapons on The
Space-Kite charged up first and Rafiq immediately fired them both in an alpha
strike.
The
mantis, being awful with delicate system repairs, hadn’t yet fixed their
cockpit, preferring to fix their shields first. They did manage to get their
level 2 shields online just before the hull laser, leading the laser volley,
reached their ship. But a damaged piloting control meant that the scout was
unable to dodge any attacks and with 5 packets between the burst and the hull
laser, the scouting ship was shredded. The 2 hull lasers disrupted the level 2
shields and the 3 burst laser packets struck the weapons cabin, hammering the ship’s
hull beyond critical.
The
hull of the scout shattered and broke apart with debris flying in all directions.
Rafiq exhaled in relief and leaned back in his chair.
“Impressive
firing Rafiq”, Zekko said over the coms from the shield room. “You certainly chose
him correctly, captain.”
Sofia
entered the room clapping. “Way to go Fick. That was the best starting battle
for a rookie I’ve ever seen or heard. No doubt about it.”
“How
do you like him now Sofia?” Lagardy asked with a chuckle over the intercom.
“Not
bad.” Sofia said while walking to the corner of the room and picking up Rafiq’s
laser pistol. “Let’s see if he can keep this up on the next ones or is this
just beginner’s luck.”
“I’ll
be honest, guys.” Rafiq said, “I knew I could make the first laser packet hit the
leading warhead when I saw its trajectory. But that hit on the 2nd missile
was pure dumb luck.”
Despite
the lucky shot, Rafiq was very happy. His first ever battle had gone well
beyond his expectations despite taking a laser volley straight on the weapons
bay in the beginning.
Sofia
walked back to Rafiq and handed him his pistol. “Keep it tightly holstered. Your
pistol can’t protect you if it flies off at the slightest tremor.”
“Right.
Sorry.” Rafiq took his gun and belted it tightly to the holster on his waist.
His aim with personal weapons was subpar but it was one of the golden rules to
keep a gun on you at all times on the field.
“And
I’m sure you don’t need me to tell you not to let this victory go to your head.
No two battles are ever alike and anything can go wrong at any time. So ALWAYS
keep your head straight in a fight or it can easily become your last.”
“Yeah
I know.” Rafiq knew very well exactly how lucky this battle was and what
could’ve happened if that second laser missed. In the worst case, that Pegasus
could’ve caused a hull breach in the weapons bay and peppered him with
shrapnels. The thought sent a chill down his spine.
“We’re
closing in on the wreckage. Sofia, stop scaring the kid and go help Pomeroy prep
the shuttle. Let’s see if we can salvage something useful”, Lagardy spoke over
the intercom.
“That’s
my cue”, Sofia said, heading towards the door.
“Rafiq,
good work on the battle but like Sofia said, don’t let either victory or loss
get to you.” Lagardy said as Pomeroy entered the weapons bay, nodded towards
Rafiq and followed Sofia out.
The
Space-Kite was now closer to the debris of the scout. Rafiq looked out the
window and he saw an escape pod floating unscathed amidst the wreckage. Then he
noticed the lifeless body of one of the mantis crew floating near the pod.
Rafiq realized that the poor fellow just fell short of entering the pod and
possibly escaping alive.
Rafiq
felt a twinge of pain. He knew what was at stake in this war and why they
fought but seeing that mantis’ body just floating there, so close to survival,
made his stomach turn. More so since he knew he was the one that killed him and
that mantis isn’t going to be the last one he kills. He was now a soldier, a
killer. He always knew from the start, back when he opted for weapons control
in the academy, that it would be his hands that would deliver the killing blow
to the enemies of whatever ship he would serve in. And now he was here, a
murderer, with blood on his hands and more blood to come.
He
shivered and shrank down in his seat as the ramifications of his actions set in.
He knew he couldn’t tell any of his crewmates about this. They were all
veterans. This was normal day-to-day life for them – kill or be killed. He had had
classes on psychology at the academy but as the teachers always said in those
classes, you never know just how it feels to kill someone until you actually do
it. There were training regimens and exercises for soldiers to calm their minds
in the time of war, to focus on why they’re fighting, to justify what would
otherwise feel like cold-blooded murder.
Rafiq,
realizing that his heart was now racing, slowed his breath. He wiped his
forehead clean of sweat as he took long deep breaths and tried to clear his
head. He started to hum a tune he heard as a kid to calm his mind. He tried to
focus on why he was here, why he was fighting. He reminded himself of the
mantis invasion of the human home sector Solcen. He remembered the images he
saw on the news as a teenager of the red claw-shaped menacing ships of the
mantis heading towards the solar system; images of the intense battle between
The Federation and the mantis armies in the outer region of the Oort clouds.
“Rafiq!”
Bear’s voice broke Rafiq’s trance and he quickly sat up alert. “Keep a close
eye on the sensors and keep the weapons hot. We don’t know if that ship was
expecting company and we need to be ready in case they did while we go about
salvaging its remains.”
Rafiq
closed his eyes and pushed all his thoughts back in the recesses of his mind.
This was not the time. He reminded himself of what Captain Bear had said back
at Signovia – “the 5 of us is all we got. So we have to take care of each
other.” The lives of his crewmates depended on him as his life depended on
them.
He
sat up straight and replied, “Aye aye, Captain!”
***
While
keeping an eye on the sensors, Rafiq had started talking with Lagardy and Zekko
which helped calm his mind. He was talking about how he had suspected the scout
to have an automated reloader augmentation when Sofia and Pomeroy signalled The
Space-Kite that they were returning.
Rafiq
kept a close watch on the vidscreen as Sofia and Pomeroy returned from
salvaging the remains of the mantis scout, towing the escape pod he saw earlier
tied behind the shuttle.
After
the shuttle had finished docking, Zekko assisted Sofia in unloading the few k-ammo
and drone parts they found amongst the floating debris along with various
miscellaneous content like broken door parts, one half of a medbay table, some
still-usable sections of the hull, a laser pistol, the twisted frame of the
Pegasus launcher – all of which can be traded for supplies at a settlement.
The
two of them pushed the escape pod salvaged from the enemy ship in a corner of
the cargo bay while Pomeroy carried some broken portions of the hard drive
which contained the scout ship’s log to Captain Lagardy on the bridge.
Lagardy
said, looking at the pieces of the log drive, “Is that all there was left?”
“Affirmative.
Status of 97.40% data, irrecoverably corrupted”, Pomeroy replied.
“What
about the other 2.6?”
“Recovered.
Data content, price memo for shop on planet Teg’rysen.” Pomeroy said, handing
Bear his datapad. “Probability of mantis scout having stopped there for
supplies, 98.00%.”
Lagardy
looked at the memo. The mantises bought an automated weapons reloader at a shop
called Gukiyo’s Trade Post located in a town called Jyoven. “Hey, Rafiq. You
were right about the auto-reloader.” He spoke in the intercom.
“Just
as I thought. No way a Pegasus can fire that fast. Even with a well trained
crew on weapons, it’d take at least 15 seconds”, Rafiq replied.
Sofia
asked over the coms from the cargo bay. “So what d’you think Cap Bear? They
could have a crew teleporter and maybe Poms can hack into the spaceport
authority’s logs…”
“And
find out where the scout was coming from or headed to. Yeah, I’m thinking the same.”
Lagardy turned towards Pomeroy & asked, “How far is Teg’rysen?”
“Spatial
distance, 3.07 parsecs. FTL jumps required, 2”, replied Pomeroy.
“It’s
decided then. Next stop, Teg’rysen.”
Footnote:
I
don’t remember what the game uses to address an engi in the third person so I’m
using ‘it’.
Ardun:
One of the many gods of the rocks.
K-ammo: Short for Kinetic Payload Ammunition,
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